Stones CD is here!
Quickly peel of the wrapper
Enjoy on crapper!

Mick Jagger, Keith Rich-
ards, Charlie Watts, Bill Wyman,
Etcetera: Stones

Why would I do that?
I don't care about haiku
this thread's off topic



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greatest hits are great!
sucking in the seventies
lick it off the plate!





OK, sorry, this is the best, and stones-related HAIKU so far!

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ChrisM
'White Stripes?
Not so great
Music better then'

Not a haiku or senryu. What do you call this?

Some people have not quite got the concept of syllables, but let's not take the fun out of it by acting like an old school marm grading papers.

Aftermath is sure
the best album they have made
Exile? No "freshness"

--Havo



Edited 4 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-25 13:56 by tatters.

mickscarey's "man crush"
though he dare not speak it's name
gay love for Sir Paul



Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-25 08:58 by tatters.

Keith sold lots of books
But many fans were soured
Too much talk is cheap



Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-25 02:59 by hbwriter.

a thread idea pops
into colonial's head
look--he's posted it!



Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-25 03:03 by tatters.

Brian Jones was the man
way back in the long ago
not a great swimmer



Edited 2 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-27 13:58 by tatters.

I just saw Jeff Beck
There are so many vintage
Guitars that he plays

Sympathy is hot
now it's time for the solo
Keef, quick, strike a pose



Edited 2 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-25 12:52 by tatters.

Keef made many riffs
But his fingers are nasty
He can't play no more

American Pie
Satan laughing with delight
paint it black, devil



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Bill Perks he don't dance
but all the little girls know
he's got a big .... amp



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Mick Taylor stands still
Vibrato in ev'ry note
His Les Paul sounds fine

Ronnie Wood mugging
Hamming it up all the time
Better in Faces

Charlie's on the beat
He only plays on four drums
But that is enough

on Shelter he swings
like no rock drummer can do
Charlie's good tonight



Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-25 09:00 by tatters.

Mick Jagger's skinny
He has very little fat
He should eat dinner

Ronnie's Keef Junior
but after thirty-six years
he's still the new guy

I'm a Finnish boy
stranger to this english tongue
still got the job done

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Child Of Clay
I'm a Finnish boy
stranger to this english tongue
still got the job done

Haikus in English
are alien anyway
Should be Japanese

Winter nearly gone
Spring is gonna be warmer
But summer is great

Good with Brian Jones
Better still with Ronnie Wood
But best with Taylor

don't want your money
said Taylor, don't want your fame
Stones are killing me



Edited 4 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-28 05:44 by tatters.

You can not write in

Japanese on this forum

Tried, but could not do

Lovely Spring sunshine ...
... and I've got a streaming cold!
Life is just not fair.

Quote
tatters

Quote
ChrisM
'White Stripes?
Not so great
Music better then'

Not a haiku or senryu. What do you call this?

Some people have not quite got the concept of syllables, but let's not take the fun out of it by acting like an old school marm grading papers.

I'm not taking the fun out of it, merely re-iterating what the parameters are. Following them shouldn't be hard to do. Part of the fun and challenge of writing haiku, senryu and so on is to do so within the rules that define them.



Edited 1 time(s). Last edit at 2011-03-25 20:25 by ChrisM.

Full it care
car was to become
Ms. Norton

by Place



Do mo ari ga to,
Mr. Ro bo to ma ta
au hi ma de

by Styx